Good enough?”“Yes, ma’am,” I said. I was already a bit dejected. I’d put my heart into this story. Toughen up, old man.“Okay. Let’s start with the story arc. I think you could begin with something more dramatic that draws the reader into the story more rapidly. It’s the third page before we have a clue that they are boarding a spaceship. Lead with it. Even a simple a sentence of thought from the main character that said, ‘I took one last look at the earth before I boarded for my journey to the stars.’ Something that immediately sets the scene. Then you can deal with the weight of his baggage, the nods to people he knew and worked with, and the scurry of preparing his room and meeting his neighbors. The way it reads at the moment, he might be arriving on campus for his second year of college. Once you got past the slightly awkward opening, though, the story arc took shape in a well-defined progression of events that made life on the spaceship reasonable and believable if the reader is. I brought my wet fingers to her mouth, and we sucked on my fingers. I, then saw the mirror across the cot and noticed Sandy’s panties had gone slightly inside her pussy. This was the first-ever time I had seen a woman’s panties wet. I went down and smelt it. It was purely out of the world.V: Sandy!Babe! Your panties are wet. Wow.S: (She smilingly said) Of course, my bitch! It was one helluva thing that you did. You know how to please a woman. Do you want me to give it to you?V: Yeah. I mean, no. I mean, are you feeling uncomfortable?S: Well, no, baby. It has happened a few times earlier as well. I actually love being in my wet panties for some time. Do you mind?V: Oh, hell! No babe! Let it be…. You look celestially sexy, babe… amazing…That feeling was ecstatic. Undescribable. She was smiling as she also was rubbing her pussy lips over the panties.V: Can I now feast a little on your gorgeous melons?She started laughing, “Melons. What crap is that? Come over, tiger.” I dived at her.
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